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Special Mention in the Fabo Story Writing Competition

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We had some students in Room 2 enter the  FABO Story competition for 2019.  Information on the competition can be found at https://fabostory.wordpress.com/2019/09/02/enter-the-new-fabo-story-competition-now-3/ 

The judging has been completed and the following students received a special mention in the Judges Report, which can be found at https://fabostory.wordpress.com/2019/09/16/elenas-fabo-story-judges-report/

Comment from the Judge: I also loved the imaginative and inventive products that popped up in the Comet store.

Portable spaceships in bulging bags and dark matter bubble gum, which was later used to encase the baddie in a bubble. Maddie (Te Huruhi School)

Comment from the Judge: Some superb characters came to life on the page.

Byron (Te Huruhi School) made excellent use of dialogue, in his funny and fast-paced story, to create a likeable alien character.
“Wait you’re just going to go without me?” asked a quiet voice. They turn to see a small alien man about the size of a small book case.

Comment from the Judge: Other stories impressed me with the creative way they used language.

Mia (Te Huruhi School) created a new word for her story’s space creature pet – a flirkin.
“Flirkin Food! Why Flirkin Food?” spilled the shopkeeper.
“We have a flirkin … obviously,” Nikau said.

Comment from the Judge: Special mentions:

Aden (Te Huruhi School) wrote a great fast paced story, which skilfully built up the tension:
“This ship has a rusty engine, low fuel and you say this is my fault. I’m trying to fix it not make it worse.”

Erin’s (Te Huruhi School) story included two of my favourite lines:
“Calm down, Nikau. We’re still in the Milky Way. There is nothing to panic about,” Anneke said …
“I know a device that can teleport a building anywhere in the Universe! We need the dust of a newly dead star and an old robot,” said a rather elderly lady.

Congratulations to all the students who entered the competition.

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